Lego writing- NOOOOOOOOOOO!

             One sunny day I asked my friend Joanne,”what should we do”? Joanne was made out Lego’s. He insisted to make a helicopter with my Lego’s so we can go to the park and fly it. What a great idea I told myself. I worked on the helicopter for hours and hours until finally I made the right design. Next I thought to myself that now I do have the design but how will it fly? After researching many different ideas I figured it out. I started building the engine and the whole helicopter was finally complete.

           We went to the park and Joanne sat inside his new helicopter. I could see in his eyes how thrilled he was. I threw the helicopter, and it crashed because the engine was made out of Lego’s. Little did I know even though I build the entire helicopter with Legos it would have crashed. I didn’t realize I needed to build a real engine in order for it to fly. It was to dark to see anything so I didn’t know Joanne had crashed into the bushes. I decided to leave and yelled to  Joanne to come home whenever he was done flying his helicopter.

When I woke up the next morning I looked next to me, expecting to see Joanne sleeping there as well but surprisingly he was not there. i quickly jumped out of my bed and ran to the park shouting his name when all of a sudden I heard something. I couldn’t understand what the noise was because it was too faint to hear. the closer I got I started to hear the voice more clearly. I finally recognized the voice, IT WAS JOANNE’S! I quickly followed the voice and ran towards it and finally found Joanne. Whew! I was relieved to have my bestie back all safe and sound. I apologized to Joanne for not being careful and I should have stuck around with him while he was flying his helicopter. I finally told myself now I know not to build an engine out of Lego’s, next time I have to make it out of paper!

 

 

One thought on “Lego writing- NOOOOOOOOOOO!

  1. This is a very creative story, Daniyal. You added a lot of detail that really helps readers picture the story in their heads. Be sure that you capitalize the first word in every sentence. Well done.

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