I Survived The Nazi Invasion

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Posted by nhaynes | Posted in Fourth Grade | Posted on March 27, 2020

This week I read about the Nazi Invasion.  So, there was a twelve year old boy named Max Rosen and he lived with his little sister Zena.  They were struggling for food after the Nazis invaded there small town.  There dad got token away from them by the Nazis and they haven’t seen him since.  Max and Zena were walking down the dusty street when two Nazi soldiers came walking by Max and Zena quickly hid  in a gutter as the to men walked by.  Max hated the Nazis he wanted to spit at them  and he even squeezed his wrested together because of how badly he wanted to punch them.  That night Max’s little sister saw a robin caught on the barb wire surrounding the whole town.  Then Max saw out of the corner of his eye a raspberry bush then Zena spotted it as well.  They both went darting toward it and then Max stretched his arms out as far as they could and was a few inches to short.  Then he looked down at the ground  and saw that their was just enough room to fit under the barb wire fence.  So Max slowly slipped under the barb wire fence and grabbed a hand full of raspberries and threw one to his sister and she popped it into her mouth and her face lit up.  To that end, that was only half of my book there is more just warning you.

Lego Writing

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Posted by nhaynes | Posted in Fourth Grade | Posted on March 25, 2020

Once there was a guy named Gary who was a excellent pilot.  One day Gary was flying in the park in his plane enjoying the nice fresh breeze on his face and then suddenly his controls shut down and Gary’s plane started to go down.  Gary was heading for a ditch but he turned his plane to a nearby tree.  He was heading straight for the tree but then his left wing ripped off the plane Gary wasn’t heading for the tree anymore he was now heading for a lake.  Gary safely parachuted out and his plane went down into the lake at 10:00 a.m. at a tiny abandoned park.  Gary was scared and he didn’t care about the plane all he cared about was his life and his head because that popped off when he was parachuting down.  To that end, Gary found his head and his plane still lays at the bottom of the deep, dark, blue lake.

Way of the Warrior Kid

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Posted by nhaynes | Posted in Fourth Grade | Posted on March 20, 2020

So far in my book the kid named Marc is getting bullied at his school and his uncle came back from the Navy and was going to visit them for the summer.  Marc had to do a work out with his uncle Jake and he didn’t really want to but if he didn’t want to get picked on anymore he’s going to have to so he could get stronger and stand up for him self. That night he was dreaming of a double cheeseburger with a large fry with a chocolate milk shake and as soon as he was about to bite in to the double cheeseburger he heard to giant trash can lids slamming together and when he woke up he saw his uncle Jake standing there waiting to go train him.  After their training Marc was kind of glad they worked out and he went to breakfast with his mom and uncle Jake.  After a few days of training Marc got used to waking up early and working out with his uncle so Therefore, that is my amazing book I read so far.

 

Castle Writing

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Posted by nhaynes | Posted in Fourth Grade | Posted on March 18, 2020

One day there was a guy named Bob.  Bob owned a giant gray castle with five hundred metal spikes around it and two lava dragons that are tamed for security.  Inside Bob has a monstrous dungeon with two hundred sixty cells each can hold ten prisoners.  Bob has a huge throne with  lots of cushioning because Bob is- lets just say- huge, because he craves cake.  He has a giant dining room and thats where he craves cake but Bob eats other things like turkey, rarely any grapes and drinks wine and thats about it.  Bob heard about a very powerful sword and you could do anything with it but only that one thing.  So Bob packed for his trip and went to get his old friend Greg.  Bob and Greg go way back they had the same job together which was shoe shining but then Bob’s grandfather died and Bob was the only one in the family who wanted the castle.  Bob and his friend Greg went into town and bought horses for the long journey.  Once they did that they set off on their way to a tombstone.  The gray tombstone had a puzzle piece to it that Bob had cause of his grandpa finding it in his closet one night then Bob found it and put it in his closet.  When they got there they were exhausted so they spent the night there on two worn out Mattresses with two dusty blankets.  In the morning they got ready for the crazy day and then they slowly crept to the tombstone and carefully put the piece in and then it started to move over and then stopped and their was a giant hole in the ground and a rope ladder leading into darkness.  Bob and Greg climbed down and their was a giant river they new they had to cross.  Then they saw a old rusty boat with  two paddles so they lit a torch and Greg palled the boat and Bob lit the way.  They reached the other side and saw a stand with the sword laying across it.  Bob picked up the sword and then a monstrous dragon rose from under them and took Greg up into the air.  Bob new he couldn’t wish for cake so he wished for teleportation and teleported his lava dragons and the lava dragons took out the other dragon.  Bob teleported his dragons back and himself and Greg back and Bob went back to craving cake.  Therefore, that is my amazing Castle Writing.

Perfect School Writing

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Posted by nhaynes | Posted in Fourth Grade | Posted on March 12, 2020

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